
Paper 1 Question 5: Example Grade 9 Answer
This is a full mark example answer, written by an AQA examiner. It’s written in response to an image prompt about an old man. Technically, this would be considered a ‘narrative writing’ answer rather than a descsriptive piece, because it does contain a plot with characters and dialogue.

Paper 1 Question 4 Example Grade 9 Answer: AQA GCSE English Language
Here’s an example Question 4 answer that received a Grade 9 (17/20) with examiner feedback. It’s in response to the ‘Rosabel’ question paper from June 2017.